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Today, I will write my english diary. I will named the diary Kaye. so I wish you will correct each sentence of my dairy,Kaye. Dear Kaye, Friday,December 16,2011 Yesterday, It was very chilly,cold and could be snowing. Since I studied enlish in junior school. I have never writed english diary. then I was so scare of keeping a diary in english. I had some bad habit of not continuing any work or studying. I want to speak and write English fluently so I will try it again. Anyway, At this time I believe that teacherkay will lead me . During one week, I learnd english from teacher kaye. It is very interesting and funny fime.



I tried to write my diary today and I decided to name it "Kaye".  hope you would read and check my sentences.

 

December 16, 2011 [Friday]

 

Dear Kaye,

 

 

Yesterday, it was very chilly, cold and seemed snowing. Since I studied English in Junior school, I have never written any English diary. Because of that, I was so scared and hesitant of keeping a diary in English. I had a bad habit of putting of doing my work and studies. Now, I want to speak and write in English fluently, so I will try to write a diary in English as much as possible.

 

Anyway, I believe that teacher Kaye will lead and help me this time . For one week of studying English with teacher Kaye, I have already learned something. It is very interesting and fun.



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